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-Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering Task
-Force (IETF), its areas, and its working groups.  Note that other groups
-may also distribute working documents as Internet-Drafts.
+Internet-Drafts (I-Ds) are working documents of the Internet
+Engineering Task Force (IETF), its areas, its working groups, and
+individual contributors.
 
-Internet-Drafts are draft documents valid for a maximum of six months
-and may be updated, replaced, or obsoleted by other documents at any
-time.  It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference material
-or to cite them other than as "work in progress."
+I-Ds are only valid for a maximum of six months and may be updated,
+replaced, or obsoleted by other documents at any time.  It is
+inappropriate to use I-Ds as reference material or to cite them
+other than as "work in progress."
 
-OpenLDAP maintains copies of drafts for which we find interesting.
-It existance does not necessarily imply any support or any plans to
-support for the I-D.  The I-Ds found in this directory may be stale,
-expired, or otherwise out of date.
+The OpenLDAP Project maintains copies of I-D for which we find
+interesting.  Existance here does not necessarily imply any support
+nor any plans to support for the I-D.  The I-Ds found in this
+directory may be stale, expired, or otherwise out of date.
 
-Please refer to http://www.ietf.org/ for latest revisions (and
+Please go to <http://www.ietf.org/> for latest revisions (and
 status).
 
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