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[openldap] / doc / drafts / draft-masarati-ldap-whatfailed-xx.txt

diff --git a/doc/drafts/draft-masarati-ldap-whatfailed-xx.txt b/doc/drafts/draft-masarati-ldap-whatfailed-xx.txt
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--- a/doc/drafts/draft-masarati-ldap-whatfailed-xx.txt
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@@ -71,17 +71,17 @@ Table of Contents
    2.  LDAP "What Failed?" Control  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  4
      2.1.  Control Semantics  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  4
      2.2.  Control Request  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  4
-     2.3.  Control Response . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  4
-   3.  Implementation Notes . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  5
-   4.  Security Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  6
-   5.  IANA Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  7
-     5.1.  Object Identifier Registration . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  7
-   6.  Acknowledgments  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  8
-   7.  References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  9
-     7.1.  Normative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  9
-     7.2.  Informative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  9
-   Author's Address . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10
-   Intellectual Property and Copyright Statements . . . . . . . . . . 11
+     2.3.  Control Response . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  5
+   3.  Implementation Notes . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  6
+   4.  Security Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  7
+   5.  IANA Considerations  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  8
+     5.1.  Object Identifier Registration . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  8
+   6.  Acknowledgments  . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .  9
+   7.  References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10
+     7.1.  Normative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10
+     7.2.  Informative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10
+   Author's Address . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
+   Intellectual Property and Copyright Statements . . . . . . . . . . 12
 
 
 
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    ordering of controls handling when requesting the "What Failed?"
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+   Servers implementing this technical specification SHOULD publish the
+   object identifier whatFailed-oid (IANA assigned; see Section 5) as a
+   value of the 'supportedControl' attribute [RFC4512] in their root
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 2.2.  Control Request
 
-   The controlType is whatFailed-oid; the controlValue MUST be absent;
-   the criticality SHOULD be FALSE.
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 2.3.  Control Response
 
-   The controlType is whatFailed-oid; the controlValue is:
+   The controlType is whatFailed-oid (IANA assigned; see Section 5); the
+   controlValue is:
 
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    [RFC4511]  Sermersheim, J., "Lightweight Directory Access Protocol
               (LDAP): The Protocol", RFC 4511, June 2006.
 
+   [RFC4512]  Zeilenga, K., "Lightweight Directory Access Protocol
+              (LDAP): Directory Information Models", RFC 4512,
+              June 2006.
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 7.2.  Informative References
 
    [RFC4526]  Zeilenga, K., "Lightweight Directory Access Protocol
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-Masarati                  Expires April 4, 2009                [Page 10]
+Masarati                  Expires April 4, 2009                [Page 11]
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-Masarati                  Expires April 4, 2009                [Page 11]
+Masarati                  Expires April 4, 2009                [Page 12]
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