Add note about "children" to access controls section.

[openldap] / doc / guide / admin / config.sdf

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--- a/doc/guide/admin/config.sdf
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@@ -3,14 +3,14 @@
 # COPYING RESTRICTIONS APPLY, see COPYRIGHT.
 H1: The Big Picture - Configuration Choices
 
-This section gives a brief overview of various LDAP directory
-configurations, and how your stand-alone LDAP server {{I:slapd}}
+This section gives a brief overview of various {{TERM:LDAP}} directory
+configurations, and how your stand-alone LDAP server {{slapd}}(8)
 fits in with the rest of the world.
 
 
 H2: Local Directory Service
 
-In this configuration, you run a {{I:slapd}} which provides directory
+In this configuration, you run a {{slapd}} which provides directory
 service for your local domain only. It does not interact with other
 directory servers in any way. This configuration is shown in Figure 3.1.
 
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ H2: Local Directory Service with Referrals
 
 In this configuration, you run a slapd which provides directory service
 for your local domain and configure it to return referrals to a
-{{superior}} service capable of requests outside your local domain.
+{{superior}} service capable of handling requests outside your local domain.
 You may run this service yourself or use one provided to you.
 This configuration is shown in Figure 3.2.
 
@@ -47,17 +47,18 @@ is shown in figure 3.3.
 !import "config_repl.gif"; align="center"; title="Replicated Directory Services"
 FT[align="Center"] Figure 3.3: Replicated Directory Services
 
-This configuration can be used in conjunction with either of first
+This configuration can be used in conjunction with either of the first
 two configurations in situations where a single slapd does not
 provide the required reliability or availability.
 
 H2: Distributed Local Directory Service
 
 In this configuration, the local service is partitioned into smaller
-services, each which may be replicated, and {{glued}} together with
-{{superior}} and {{subordinate}} referrals.  An example of this
-configuration is shown in Figure 3.4.
+services, each of which may be replicated, and {{glued}} together with
+{{superior}} and {{subordinate}} referrals.
+!if 0
+An example of this configuration is shown in Figure 3.4.
 
 !import "config_dist.gif"; align="center"; title="Distributed Local Directory Services"
 FT[align="Center"] Figure 3.4: Distributed Local Directory Services
-
+!endif