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diff --git a/doc/guide/admin/referrals.sdf b/doc/guide/admin/referrals.sdf
index f469245de997266e5568f6873397bef2a3f7e2e8..f4057d1c12b7e2bc271cc9a368da7155f70b4e2e 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/guide/admin/referrals.sdf
+++ b/doc/guide/admin/referrals.sdf
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Subordinate knowledge information is maintained in the directory
 as a special {{referral}} object at the delegate point.
 The referral object acts as a delegation point, gluing two services
 together.
-This mechanism allows for hierarchical directory services to to be
+This mechanism allows for hierarchical directory services to be
 constructed.
 
 A referral object has a structural object class of
@@ -40,11 +40,11 @@ and wished to delegate the subtree {{EX:ou=subtree,dc=example,dc=net}}
 to another server {{EX:b.example.net}}, the following named referral
 object would be added to {{EX:a.example.net}}:
 
->      dn: dc=subtree, dc=example, dc=net
+>      dn: dc=subtree,dc=example,dc=net
 >      objectClass: referral
 >      objectClass: extensibleObject
 >      dc: subtree
->      ref: ldap://b.example.net/dc=subtree,dc=example,dc=net/
+>      ref: ldap://b.example.net/dc=subtree,dc=example,dc=net
 
 The server uses this information to generate referrals and
 search continuations to subordinate servers.
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ Extending the example above, a {{ref}} attribute can be added
 to the entry {{EX:dc=subtree,dc=example,dc=net}} in server B indicating
 that A holds the immediate superior naming context.
 
->      dn: dc=subtree, dc=example, dc=net
+>      dn: dc=subtree,dc=example,dc=net
 >      changetype: modify
 >      add: ref
 >      ref: ldap://a.example.net/
@@ -84,20 +84,20 @@ Superior knowledge information may be specified using the
 {{EX:referral}} directive.  The value is a list of {{TERM:URI}}s
 referring to superior directory services.  For servers without
 immediate superiors, such as for {{EX:a.example.net}} in the example
-above, the server can be configured to use directory service with
+above, the server can be configured to use a directory service with
 {{global knowledge}}, such as the {{OpenLDAP Root Service}}
 ({{URL:http://www.openldap.org/faq/index.cgi?file=393}}).
 
 >      referral        ldap://root.openldap.org/
 
 However, as {{EX:a.example.net}} is the {{immediate superior}}
-to {{EX:b.example.net}}, {{a.example.net}} would be configured
+to {{EX:b.example.net}}, {{b.example.net}} would be configured
 as follows:
 
 >      referral        ldap://a.example.net/
 
-The server uses this information to generate referrals to
-operations acting upon operations not within or subordinate
+The server uses this information to generate referrals for
+operations acting upon entries not within or subordinate
 to any of the naming contexts held by the server.
 
 For those familiar with X.500, this use of the {{EX:ref}} attribute