Tweaks to English and spelling

diff --git a/docs/manuals/en/concepts/newfeatures.tex b/docs/manuals/en/concepts/newfeatures.tex
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--- a/docs/manuals/en/concepts/newfeatures.tex
+++ b/docs/manuals/en/concepts/newfeatures.tex
@@ -102,10 +102,10 @@ This project was funded by Bacula Systems.
 \section{Accurate Fileset options}
 \label{sec:accuratefileset}
 
 \section{Accurate Fileset options}
 \label{sec:accuratefileset}
 

-In previous version, the accurate code was using file time creation and
-modification to determine if a file was modified or not. Now you can specify
-witch attribute to use (time, size, checksum, permission, owner, group,
-\dots).
+In previous versions, the accurate code used the file creation and
+modification times to determine if a file was modified or not. Now you can specify
+which attributes to use (time, size, checksum, permission, owner, group,
+\dots), similar to the Verify options.

 
 \begin{verbatim}
 FileSet {
 
 \begin{verbatim}
 FileSet {


@@ -158,16 +158,17 @@ FileSet {
   compare the SHA1 signature  
 \end{description}
 
   compare the SHA1 signature  
 \end{description}
 

-\textbf{Important note:} If you decide to use checksum in Accurate jobs, the
-File Daemon will have to read all files even if they won't be saved. It
-increases the I/O load, but also the security. By default, Bacula will 
-check modification/creation time and size.
+\textbf{Important note:} If you decide to use checksum in Accurate jobs,
+the File Daemon will have to read all files even if they normally would not
+be saved.  This increases the I/O load, but also the accuracy of the
+deduplication.  By default, Bacula will check modification/creation time
+and size.

 
 \section{Bvfs API}
 \label{sec:bvfs}
 
 
 \section{Bvfs API}
 \label{sec:bvfs}
 

-To help developers in restore GUI interfaces, we have added new \textsl{dot
-  commands} that permit to browse the catalog in a very simple way.
+To help developers of restore GUI interfaces, we have added new \textsl{dot
+  commands} that permit browsing the catalog in a very simple way.

 
 \begin{itemize}
 \item \texttt{.bvfs\_update [jobid=x,y,z]} This command is required to update the
 
 \begin{itemize}
 \item \texttt{.bvfs\_update [jobid=x,y,z]} This command is required to update the


@@ -176,12 +177,12 @@ To help developers in restore GUI interfaces, we have added new \textsl{dot
 
 \item \texttt{.bvfs\_lsdirs jobid=x,y,z path=/path | pathid=101} This command
   will list all directories in the specified \texttt{path} or
 
 \item \texttt{.bvfs\_lsdirs jobid=x,y,z path=/path | pathid=101} This command
   will list all directories in the specified \texttt{path} or

-  \texttt{pathid}. Using \texttt{pathid} avoids problems with caracters
-  encoding.
+  \texttt{pathid}. Using \texttt{pathid} avoids problems with character
+  encoding of path/filenames.

 
 \item \texttt{.bvfs\_lsfiles jobid=x,y,z path=/path | pathid=101} This command
   will list all files in the specified \texttt{path} or \texttt{pathid}. Using
 
 \item \texttt{.bvfs\_lsfiles jobid=x,y,z path=/path | pathid=101} This command
   will list all files in the specified \texttt{path} or \texttt{pathid}. Using

-  \texttt{pathid} avoids problems with caracters encoding.
+  \texttt{pathid} avoids problems with character encoding.

 \end{itemize}
 
 You can use \texttt{limit=xxx} and \texttt{offset=yyy} to limit the amount of
 \end{itemize}
 
 You can use \texttt{limit=xxx} and \texttt{offset=yyy} to limit the amount of


@@ -197,7 +198,7 @@ data that will be displayed.
 \label{sec:btapespeed}
 
 To determine the best configuration of your tape drive, you can run the new
 \label{sec:btapespeed}
 
 To determine the best configuration of your tape drive, you can run the new

-\texttt{speed} command available in \texttt{btape}.
+\texttt{speed} command available in the \texttt{btape} program.

 
 This command can have the following arguments:
 \begin{itemize}
 
 This command can have the following arguments:
 \begin{itemize}


@@ -250,7 +251,7 @@ done by adding:
 Block Checksum = no
 \end{verbatim}
 
 Block Checksum = no
 \end{verbatim}
 

-doing so can reduce the Storage daemon CPU speed slightly.  It
+doing so can reduce the Storage daemon CPU usage slightly.  It

 will also permit Bacula to read a Volume that has corrupted data.
 
 The default is {\bf yes} -- i.e. the checksum is computed on write
 will also permit Bacula to read a Volume that has corrupted data.
 
 The default is {\bf yes} -- i.e. the checksum is computed on write


@@ -258,7 +259,7 @@ and checked on read.
 
 We do not recommend to turn this off particularly on older tape
 drives or for disk Volumes where doing so may allow corrupted data
 
 We do not recommend to turn this off particularly on older tape
 drives or for disk Volumes where doing so may allow corrupted data

-to be undetected.
+to go undetected.

 
 \section{New Bat Features}
 
 
 \section{New Bat Features}