Clarify

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-Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering
-Task Force (IETF), its areas, and its working groups.  Note that
-other groups may also distribute working documents as Internet-Drafts.
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+Engineering Task Force (IETF), its areas, its working groups, and
+individual contributors.
 
-Internet-Drafts are draft documents valid for a maximum of six
-months and may be updated, replaced, or obsoleted by other documents
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 status).
 
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