use example.com (RFC2606); mention OpenLDAP-assigned work-in-progress OID

diff --git a/doc/drafts/draft-masarati-ldap-deref-xx.txt b/doc/drafts/draft-masarati-ldap-deref-xx.txt
index 6551d8d07b8dc22eeb0af813b8c3b43efa71854a..346046a00f2c4e0db509478a6f77896414334c8c 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/drafts/draft-masarati-ldap-deref-xx.txt
+++ b/doc/drafts/draft-masarati-ldap-deref-xx.txt
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
 Network Working Group                                        P. Masarati
 Internet-Draft                                     Politecnico di Milano
 Intended status: Standards Track                                  H. Chu
-Expires: May 1, 2009                                         Symas Corp.
-                                                        October 28, 2008
+Expires: April 4, 2009                                       Symas Corp.
+                                                            October 2008
 
 
                         LDAP Dereference Control
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Status of this Memo
    The list of Internet-Draft Shadow Directories can be accessed at
    http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html.
 
-   This Internet-Draft will expire on May 1, 2009.
+   This Internet-Draft will expire on April 4, 2009.
 
 
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Status of this Memo
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                  [Page 1]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                 [Page 1]
 \f
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@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ Table of Contents
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                  [Page 2]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                 [Page 2]
 \f
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@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                  [Page 3]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                 [Page 3]
 \f
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@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                  [Page 4]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                 [Page 4]
 \f
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@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@ Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                  [Page 5]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                 [Page 5]
 \f
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@@ -285,23 +285,23 @@ Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
 
    Given these entries:
 
-       dn: cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org
+       dn: cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org
        objectClass: inetOrgPerson
        cn: Howard Chu
        sn: Chu
        uid: hyc
 
-       dn: cn=Pierangelo Masarati,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org
+       dn: cn=Pierangelo Masarati,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org
        objectClass: inetOrgPerson
        cn: Pierangelo Masarati
        sn: Masarati
        uid: ando
 
-       dn: cn=Test Group,ou=groups,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org
+       dn: cn=Test Group,ou=groups,dc=example,dc=org
        objectClass: groupOfNames
        cn: Test Group
-       member: cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org
-       member: cn=Pierangelo,Masarati,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org
+       member: cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org
+       member: cn=Pierangelo,Masarati,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org
 
    A search could be performed with a Dereference request control value
    specified as
@@ -311,9 +311,9 @@ Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
    and the "cn=Test Group" entry would be returned with the response
    control value
 
-       { { member, cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org,
+       { { member, cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org,
            { { uid, [hyc] } } },
-         { member, cn=Pierangelo Masarati,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org,
+         { member, cn=Pierangelo Masarati,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org,
            { { uid, [ando] } } } }
 
 
@@ -332,14 +332,16 @@ Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                  [Page 6]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                 [Page 6]
 \f
 Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
 
 
 4.  Implementation Notes
 
-   This LDAP extension is currently implemented in OpenLDAP software.
+   This LDAP extension is currently implemented in OpenLDAP software
+   suing the temporary OID 1.3.6.1.4.1.4203.666.5.16 under OpenLDAP's
+   experimental OID arc.
 
 
 
@@ -386,9 +388,7 @@ Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
 
 
 
-
-
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                  [Page 7]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                 [Page 7]
 \f
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@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                  [Page 8]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                 [Page 8]
 \f
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@@ -500,7 +500,7 @@ Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                  [Page 9]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                 [Page 9]
 \f
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@@ -556,7 +556,7 @@ Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                 [Page 10]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                [Page 10]
 \f
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@@ -612,7 +612,7 @@ Internet-Draft                 LDAP Deref                   October 2008
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                 [Page 11]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                [Page 11]
 \f
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@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ Authors' Addresses
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                 [Page 12]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                [Page 12]
 \f
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@@ -724,5 +724,5 @@ Intellectual Property
 
 
 
-Masarati & Chu             Expires May 1, 2009                 [Page 13]
+Masarati & Chu            Expires April 4, 2009                [Page 13]
 \f

diff --git a/doc/drafts/draft-masarati-ldap-deref.xml b/doc/drafts/draft-masarati-ldap-deref.xml
index 07c8f8d6889eb92052a687d79ddacef35fb26e18..4a857150820e319967e06f4f14d6a09bbfdbc715 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/drafts/draft-masarati-ldap-deref.xml
+++ b/doc/drafts/draft-masarati-ldap-deref.xml
@@ -228,23 +228,23 @@ is omitted.
 Given these entries:
                 </preamble>
                 <artwork>
-    dn: cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org
+    dn: cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org
     objectClass: inetOrgPerson
     cn: Howard Chu
     sn: Chu
     uid: hyc
 
-    dn: cn=Pierangelo Masarati,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org
+    dn: cn=Pierangelo Masarati,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org
     objectClass: inetOrgPerson
     cn: Pierangelo Masarati
     sn: Masarati
     uid: ando
 
-    dn: cn=Test Group,ou=groups,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org
+    dn: cn=Test Group,ou=groups,dc=example,dc=org
     objectClass: groupOfNames
     cn: Test Group
-    member: cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org
-    member: cn=Pierangelo,Masarati,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org
+    member: cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org
+    member: cn=Pierangelo,Masarati,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org
                  </artwork>
             </figure>
             <figure>
@@ -262,9 +262,9 @@ and the "cn=Test Group" entry would be returned with the response control
 value
                 </preamble>
                 <artwork>
-    { { member, cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org,
+    { { member, cn=Howard Chu,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org,
         { { uid, [hyc] } } },
-      { member, cn=Pierangelo Masarati,ou=people,dc=OpenLDAP,dc=org,
+      { member, cn=Pierangelo Masarati,ou=people,dc=example,dc=org,
         { { uid, [ando] } } } }
                 </artwork>
             </figure>
@@ -272,7 +272,9 @@ value
 
         <section title="Implementation Notes">
         <t>
-This LDAP extension is currently implemented in OpenLDAP software.
+This LDAP extension is currently implemented in OpenLDAP software
+suing the temporary OID 1.3.6.1.4.1.4203.666.5.16 under OpenLDAP's
+experimental OID arc.
         </t>
         </section>