From: Kern Sibbald Date: Wed, 20 Dec 2006 13:52:20 +0000 (+0000) Subject: Updates X-Git-Tag: Release-2.0.0~96 X-Git-Url: https://git.sur5r.net/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=367bb1deb429219577032faefaea8e444a9a6f46;p=bacula%2Fdocs Updates --- diff --git a/docs/developers/version.tex b/docs/developers/version.tex index 6f9c56e2..146adc4c 100644 --- a/docs/developers/version.tex +++ b/docs/developers/version.tex @@ -1 +1 @@ -1.39.30 (08 December 2006) +1.39.32 (20 December 2006) diff --git a/docs/manual-de/version.tex b/docs/manual-de/version.tex index 6f9c56e2..146adc4c 100644 --- a/docs/manual-de/version.tex +++ b/docs/manual-de/version.tex @@ -1 +1 @@ -1.39.30 (08 December 2006) +1.39.32 (20 December 2006) diff --git a/docs/manual/STYLE b/docs/manual/STYLE new file mode 100644 index 00000000..6cd70564 --- /dev/null +++ b/docs/manual/STYLE @@ -0,0 +1,76 @@ +TODO + +maybe spell out "config" to "configuration" as appropriate + +Use American versus British spelling + +not critical, but for later consider cleaning out some use of +"there" and rewrite to not be so passive. + +make sure use of \elink shows URL in printed book + +get rid of many references of "Red Hat" -- too platform specific? + +remove references to names, like "Dan Langille shared ..." +just put their names in credits for book + +don't refer to very old software by specific version such as +"Red Hat 7" or FreeBSD 4.9 because is too old to put in book. It may be +relevant, but may be confusing. Maybe just remove the version number +if applicable. + +maybe fine, but discuss point-of-view: don't use personal "I" or +possessive "my" unless that is consistent style for book. + +replace "32 bit" and "64 bit" with "32-bit" and "64-bit" respectively. +It seems like more popular style standard + +be consistent with "Note" and "NOTE". maybe use tex header for this + +get rid of redundant or noisy exclamation marks + +style for "ctl-alt-del" and "ctl-d"? and be consisten with formatting + +be consistent for case for ext3, ext2, EXT3, or EXT2. + +fix spelling of "inspite" in source and in docs (maybe use "regardless +in one place where I already changed to "in spite" + +be consistent with software names, like postgres, postgresql, PostreSQL +and others + +instead of using whitehouse for examples, use example.org (as that is defined +for that usage); also check other hostnames and maybe IPs and networks + +use section numbers and cross reference by section number or page number +no underlining in book (this is not the web :) + +some big gaps between paragraphs or between section headers and paragraphs +-- due to tex -- adjust as necessary to look nice + +don't include the GPL and LGPL in book. This will save 19 (A4) pages. +For 6x9 book this will save 30 pages. (Keep GFDL though.) + +many index items are too long + +appendices not listed as appendix + +some how consolidate indexes into one? on 6x9, the indexes are over 30 pages + +don't refer to some website without including URL also +(such as "this FreeBSD Diary article") + +get rid of (R) trademark symbols -- only use on first use; for example +don't put on the RPM Packaging FAQ + +split up very long paragraphs, such as "As mentioned above, you will need ..." +(on my page 783). + +use smaller font or split up long lines (especially from +console output which is wider than printed page) + +don't assume all BSD is "FreeBSD" + +don't assume all "kernel" is Linux. If it is Linux, be clear. + + diff --git a/docs/manual/version.tex b/docs/manual/version.tex index 6f9c56e2..146adc4c 100644 --- a/docs/manual/version.tex +++ b/docs/manual/version.tex @@ -1 +1 @@ -1.39.30 (08 December 2006) +1.39.32 (20 December 2006)