From: Kern Sibbald <kern@sibbald.com>
Date: Fri, 16 Mar 2012 10:20:52 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: Tweak LZO documentation
X-Git-Url: https://git.sur5r.net/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=dc8c7bab084a09dc796e8a34dcf9be5dec461535;p=bacula%2Fdocs

Tweak LZO documentation
---

diff --git a/docs/manuals/en/main/newfeatures.tex b/docs/manuals/en/main/newfeatures.tex
index 1ad2af5a..11a24f05 100644
--- a/docs/manuals/en/main/newfeatures.tex
+++ b/docs/manuals/en/main/newfeatures.tex
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ is required for the Enterprise version.
 
 \section{LZO Compression}
 
-LZO compression was added in the Unix File Daemon. From the user point of view,
+LZO compression has been to the File daemon. From the user's point of view,
 it works like the GZIP compression (just replace {\bf compression=GZIP} with
 {\bf compression=LZO}).
 
@@ -37,12 +37,12 @@ Include {
 }
 \end{verbatim}
 
-LZO provides much faster compression and decompression speed but lower
+LZO provides a much faster compression and decompression speed but lower
 compression ratio than GZIP. It is a good option when you backup to disk. For
-tape, the built-in compression may be a better option.
+tape, the hardware compression is almost always a better option.
 
 LZO is a good altenative for GZIP1 when you don't want to slow down your
-backup. On a modern CPU it should be able to run almost as fast as:
+backup. With a modern CPU it should be able to run almost as fast as:
 
 \begin{itemize}
 \item your client can read data from disk. Unless you have very fast disks like
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ backup. On a modern CPU it should be able to run almost as fast as:
   a 1Gb/s link.
 \end{itemize}
 
-Note that bacula only use one compression level LZO1X-1.
+Note, Bacula uses compression level LZO1X-1.
 
 \medskip
 The code for this feature was contributed by Laurent Papier.