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diff --git a/docs/manuals/en/main/fileset.tex b/docs/manuals/en/main/fileset.tex
index 5284bd9adf5195e9a31a5d28deb32789baa75ea0..3d18330b26714ef3c67522ddff74def1165d266e 100644 (file)
--- a/docs/manuals/en/main/fileset.tex
+++ b/docs/manuals/en/main/fileset.tex
@@ -91,9 +91,7 @@ defined for each Backup job.
 \index[dir]{Include \{ [ Options \{\lt{}file-options\gt{}\} ...]
    \lt{}file-list\gt{} \}  }
 \index[dir]{Directive!Include}
-
-\item [Options \{ \lt{}file-options\gt{} \} ]
-\index[dir]{Options  \{ \lt{}file-options\gt{} \}  }
+\index[dir]{Options \{ \lt{}file-options\gt{} \}  }
 
 \item [Exclude \{ \lt{}file-list\gt{} \}]
 \index[dir]{Exclude \{ \lt{}file-list\gt{} \} }
@@ -359,8 +357,8 @@ options below.
       \end{description}
 
    A useful set of general options on the {\bf Level=Catalog}  or {\bf
-   Level=DiskToCatalog}  verify is {\bf pins5} i.e. compare permission bits,
-   inodes, number  of links, size, and MD5 changes. 
+   Level=DiskToCatalog}  verify is {\bf pins5} i.e. compare permission bits, then
+   inodes, number  of links, size, and finally MD5 changes.
 
 \item [onefs=yes\vb{}no]
 \index[dir]{onefs}
@@ -890,8 +888,6 @@ Change: 2005-11-06 12:36:48.000000000 +0100
    non-local filesystems. Normally, when you use this directive, you
    would also set {\bf onefs=no} so that Bacula will traverse filesystems.
 
-   This option is not implemented in Win32 systems.
-
 \item [DriveType=Windows-drive-type]
 \index[dir]{DriveType}
 \index[dir]{Directive!DriveType}
@@ -1525,12 +1521,13 @@ C:/Documents and Settings/*/My Documents/My Pictures/*
 To understand how this can be achieved, there are two important points to
 remember:
 
-Firstly, Bacula walks over the filesystem depth-first starting from the File =
-lines.  It stops descending when a directory is excluded, so you must include
-all ancestor directories of each directory containing files to be included.
+Firstly, Bacula traverses the filesystem starting from the File = lines.
+It stops descending when a directory is excluded, so you must include all
+ancestor (higher level) directories of each directory containing files to
+be included.
 
 Secondly, each directory and file is compared to the Options clauses in the
-order they appear in the FileSet.  When a match is found, no further clauses
+order they appear in the FileSet.  When a match is found, no further Optionss
 are compared and the directory or file is either included or excluded.
 
 The FileSet resource definition below implements this by including specifc